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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Tue Mar 08, 2011 8:38 pm

OMG! Great minds think alike!!! Smile maybe we can do different versions of it! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Wed Mar 09, 2011 3:27 pm

I finished reading this last night and it's amazing. You have a real talent for writing, "Reminds me of me actually..." Wink
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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Wed Mar 09, 2011 5:12 pm

hahaha.... I agree!! She is really talented in writing!! I have to post my Novel after it is finish... All I'm telling you is that the title is, The Secret. It is about a girl, Atina ( Not me) and a boy, Jaster (not real name). Atina is on the Seps... but Jaster is a Republican.... That is all I'm telling you for now...............
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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Wed Mar 09, 2011 5:49 pm

Atina, you're story is really good. Smile

Aww!!! Thanks JediKnightGrl!!!!!! Very Happy That's so sweet!! Wink

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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Wed Mar 09, 2011 6:46 pm

Thanks Jedi~Chick..

btw, didya find any errors?
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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Wed Mar 09, 2011 7:00 pm

Not really, I think maybe one or two....I'll PM you. Wink

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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Mon Mar 14, 2011 10:30 am

Okay!! I've got Part Five up and ready to go!!! Very Happy Y'all ready???? Lets get on with the show!!! Very Happy


PART 5

Ahsoka and I smiled at each other confidently, feeling like we just solved all our problems. Yeah, right. We decided to actually keep our promise to Anakin and make some dinner, but we didn’t feel like cooking, so instead we ordered in from Dex’s Diner. It was better than Mess Hall mush any day. Plus, we knew that Anakin had had a tough day and he needed something good tasting to relax him a little bit. We ordered Anakin his favorite dishes off the menu and waited for the delivery guy to come. Our quarters door buzzed and Ahsoka jumped up to go answer it. “That must be the delivery guy,” she said behind her as she trotted towards the door. I was still fingering through a magazine when I heard Ahsoka gasp in the doorway. I looked up. Guess what I saw? The face of evil.

“Palpatine,” I muttered angrily. Palpatine didn’t look all old and wrinkled, or ugly just yet. He still looked fairly young compared to his state in Return of the Jedi, but he looked evil nonetheless. Ahsoka and I both whipped out our lightsabers, and Chancellor Palpatine said smoothly, “Now, now, Children, you wouldn’t kill a kindly old politician? Now would you? Especially not your Master’s friend…..oh, no, he would be MOST displeased with you.” His voice was oily and cool, like it was obvious he was lying yet very convincing at the same time. Ahsoka and I didn’t lower our lightsabers. “We know who you are Sideous!” I spat. Palpatine looked annoyed, but unfazed. He didn’t seem to care that we knew who he really was. Suddenly, he drew a lightsaber out from his robes. “Have you two been meddling in your Master’s business??? DISRUPTING MY PLANS????” he began to screech. “We saw right through you, you lying lowlife!” Ahsoka snapped at him. I see where she gets her nickname. I would laugh if we were in a different situation. “He’s reporting you to the Council as we speak. And there is nothing that you can do about it!!!” Palpatine cackled an evil cackle. “Oh, dear child, you’d be surprised about what I can do.” He grinned evilly and shot the same blue Sith Lightning I saw in the movies at me and Ahsoka. We both screamed and fell to the ground.



Ahsoka and I were squirming and writhing in pain, just like Luke did in Return of the Jedi. All I felt was pain. Shockingly strong pain. Then Anakin came in. My hero. He came in and blocked the lightning with his lightsaber. “My friend….” He growled in sarcasm. “Ah, Anakin. These two meddling young girls were about to crush your only chance of saving your wife!” Anakin shook his head furiously. “No.” he said stubbornly, “No they weren’t. It was YOU!” he cried, engaging in a lightsaber duel with the Sith. Ahsoka and I watched helplessly from the floor as Anakin and Darth Sideous enthralled in a fierce lightsaber battle. Anakin was getting beaten pretty badly by the devilish Sith Lord, when I spotted my lightsaber rolled a few feet away. I tried to get up, but my legs refused to work, and when I tried to crawl there, my arms gave out too. My body was still in shock from all the Sith Lightning, (which thanks to the Truce at Bakura book, I knew it did more serious damage than you would think…) and I couldn’t move. Apparently Ahsoka was having the same problems. Calmly, I stretched out with the Force, and prayed that my lightsaber would listen. It did. My lightsaber flew to my hand, and I activated it, Force throwing it across the room to hit Palpatine’s legs. I was surprised by the metallic “ping” that I heard as my lightsaber made contact with his long robes. He laughed tauntingly at me. “Did you really think you could do that child?” he asked. “These robes are bulletproof! Any SMART politician would be wearing them…you never CAN take chances these days” he said haughtily, “What with the war, and the people who want you dea---“ Palpatine stopped short as Anakin’s lightsaber dug into his chest, where the bulletproof robes parted slightly. “We want to kill you? I thought YOU were the Sith Lord!” Anakin said sarcastically, watching as his fake friend’s body fell to the ground. Ahsoka and I cheered, now gaining the ability to move back. Anakin sighed, deactivated his lightsaber and rushed to pick up Ahsoka. He carefully put her on the couch, and then lifted me and gently placed me next to her. “Are you two alright?” he asked worriedly. Ahsoka and I both assured him that we were fine, but seriously, we both weren’t feeling too hot. “Master,” I said, “You just fixed it. There’s no more Sith Lord. You killed Dooku and you killed Palpatine. The Sith are destroyed. You did it Master! You brought balance to the Force!!!!” I said excitedly. Ahsoka nodded and hugged Anakin tightly. I did as well. He smiled and relaxed, hugging both of us back. He cried a few tears of relief, and then Obi-Wan burst into the room, shocked to see Anakin with his arms around his Padawans, and Palpatine dead on the floor of the room. “What in blazes is going on in here?!?” Obi-Wan cried, indicating Palpatine’s dead body. “Master Kenobi!!!” I cried. Ahsoka smiled at him, relieved. “Master Kenobi!!! Anakin did it! He brought balance to the Force!!!” she said excitedly. “The Sith are no more!!” I added, and Obi-Wan sat on a chair near us. “What happened?” he noticed Ahsoka and I’s singed robes and dresses and listened patiently as we explained what had just taken place. Obi-Wan gaped at us, and told Anakin to take both Ahsoka and I to the Med Center immediately to check us for further injuries. We assured him we were fine, but Obi-Wan and Anakin were both unconvinced. So we decided to go ahead and please them just this once. Anakin stayed by our sides the whole time we were in the Med Center, and just as Ahsoka and I were going to go into a rejuvenating Bacta bath to heal the minor burns and lightning injuries, Ahsoka smiled at Anakin and said, “Master, go to Padme. Explain everything that’s happened.” Anakin nodded and smiled at us gratefully. “And Master!” I called, “Tell her we say hi, and good luck with the baby.” Anakin nodded again and waved goodbye to us. Ahsoka and I giggled and laid back on the Medic beds, relieved that we finally saved Anakin from his fate. We knew now that everything would be fine. I was thinking about everything that was now going to happen. Somehow I knew that little Luke and Leia Skywalker would be just fine, and that little Luke would turn into Luke Skywalker, Jedi Knight, and that Leia would somehow be Leia Skywalker, senator of the Republic. I also figured that somehow she would meet and fall in love with Han Solo. Maybe Han would even have a better childhood without the Empire. I didn’t really know, but just before I went into the Bacta bath, I felt confident it would all be fine.

Okay, what did you think? Smile The next part will be funny and longer. Wink It's getting good!! Very Happy I don't know how I will end it though.....I've got to think on it. Razz Hoped you liked it!!!!!!!!

P.S. Atina, I'm working on Part 2 1/2 with your characters in it. Let me know if you have written anything else, because I need more to add in!!! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Mon Mar 14, 2011 10:41 am

Good job! I like it!

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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Mon Mar 14, 2011 10:42 am

Aaaaahhhhh! Chapter 5 was so good!! Good job Jedi~Chick!
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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Mon Mar 14, 2011 10:47 am

I love it!!!1

The only thing that changed is that the ship gets hi-jacked by Mando warriors, who are looking for...I'm not sure who.. that is really all I got...lol Razz I really love it!!! it is soooooooo awesome!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Mon Mar 14, 2011 11:09 am

Ahhhh! Eeeeeeeeeeepppp! I love it! Very Happy Forget ROTS, this is how Star Wars really should have happened! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Mon Mar 14, 2011 12:37 pm

Yay!!!! I love it!!!! If only ROTS ended like this.

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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Mon Mar 14, 2011 2:46 pm

Aww!!!! Thanks girls!!! Very Happy
Amaranthine and Rex'sGirl: Thanks!!! Very Happy I'm glad you liked it!!

Atina: Cool!! PM it to me! Wink Glad you liked it too!!!

Rachel: Aww! Thanks! Smile Haha, i think it should've ended like this too.

Satine: Smile Thank you!!! Very Happy Again, ROTS should've been like this! Wink LOL!

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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Mon Mar 14, 2011 7:18 pm

Gah! That's almost EXACTLY what I was gonna do! Why do we have to be so much alike? Besides that, I LOVED it!

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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Tue Mar 15, 2011 1:24 pm

LOL!!!! Allishmalli, great minds think alike!!! Wink That's so funny. Glad you liked it!! Wink I think Part 6 will be the last chapter. Crying or Very sad But I'm going to post another story soon!!!!! LOL! Smile

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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Thu Mar 17, 2011 11:40 am

OMG!! finally... internet... sorry that i haven't been foruming... house was fumigated... grandma's house= no wifi... lol!!! im soooo happy to be back!!!

JEDI~CHICK: i just added a new part to my story... ill pm it to you!!!

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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Thu Mar 17, 2011 1:18 pm

Yaaaaay!!!! Smile I can't wait to read it!!!!!! Very Happy Glad your back!!!!!!!

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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Wed Mar 30, 2011 3:39 pm

this story is soooooooooooooooooooooooo funny! couldnt stop reading it! lol!
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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Wed Mar 30, 2011 5:53 pm

Smile Thanks!! Wink LOL!

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PostSubject: Re: I'm trapped in the Star Wars Universe!!   Sun Apr 17, 2011 10:55 pm

I LOVE IT!!! I CAN'T WATE FOR MORE!!!
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