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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Tue Mar 29, 2011 10:25 am

LOL, she is. My room is covered in clothes for a reason...... Razz LOL! Palpypie's been good so far today......but he keeps bugging me to take him to the park. Razz *turns to Palpypie* No, I won't take you right now. It's a school day!!! *sighs* He never listens. Wink LOL!

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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Tue Mar 29, 2011 11:34 am

Lol! You sound like Ahsoka! Lol! Maybe I can blame her for my messy room! Lol! I just can't figure out a name for her! The rules are she is not allowed to get on the bed and she has to stay in my quarters! Wink
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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Tue Mar 29, 2011 11:46 am

LOL!!! Smile I blame Lilac and Palpypie for my messy room. XD She never follows my rules. Razz

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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Tue Mar 29, 2011 12:18 pm

Lol! That's why I have the perfect size shame corner for her! Can't blame ya for that!
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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Tue Mar 29, 2011 12:54 pm

I need to get a shame corner!!!! Palpypie will be in it a lot. Lilac is too sweet. She may be troublesome, but she's my baby and she's too cute for me to care. Palpypie is bad. He needs punishment! XP LOL! Just kidding, I love him too. Razz

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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Tue Mar 29, 2011 2:55 pm

Lol! Yeah I invested in two! One for her and one for Rex! Lol! Rex is naughty at times believe it or not! Lol! Laughing Then he makes me feel bad for him so he gets a hug! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Tue Mar 29, 2011 3:06 pm

LOL! I'm totally getting a shame corner. I'll go out and get one right now!! Very Happy Anakin's bad too sometimes.....but I can't say no to him. He ends up with a hug as well! Razz

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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Tue Mar 29, 2011 3:13 pm

I don't know how I lived without one. You made a good decision! Lol! Oh the things they do to make us feel sorry for them!
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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Tue Mar 29, 2011 3:28 pm

Haha!! This is fun talking about our lives in the SW Universe. Smile I think I'll make a topic for it. Very Happy Then I'll move all these posts there, so we can have this topic be just for your Fanfic Rex'sgirl! Wink Is that okay with you?

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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Tue Mar 29, 2011 3:31 pm

Ahhh, I can't believe I haven't commented in so long! I'm so sorry! Your story is going great Rex'sgirl, keep up the amazing work! captain rex

I just loved this part at the end:

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Jerex went back to his chamber took a nice long shower, changed into his night robes, and fell asleep. His last thought was 'Tomorrow I face the Jedi Council. May The Force be with me.'

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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Tue Mar 29, 2011 4:18 pm

Yeah that's fine Jedi~Chick! I like that idea! Its ok Rachel don't worry about it! Very Happy Im glad you are enjoying it! I like that part to! Im in the middle of writing chapter 4! It should be done soon!!
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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:11 pm

Yay! I'm sure it will be amazing! Very Happy captain rex

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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:30 pm

Thank you that makes me real confident! captain rex
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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Fri Apr 01, 2011 11:05 pm

Ok finally got chapter 4 done sorry about the long wait! Hope yall like it! Im still loving the Rex smiley! Lol!
One of a Kind
Chapter 4

Jerex awoke the next morning refreshed and ready to face the council. He changed into a rough tan tunic with a dark chocolate brown belt and matching boots. "Wow I like these boots," Jerex said with admiration. What he didnt expect was the training saber on his bed. "Whoa wasnt expecting this so soon!" Jerex switches the golden button on the sliver and black hilt. The silver blade sprung to life Jerex stood there mezmerized by the humming blade. The hilt was new and felt so natural to him like it was attached to him just like his hand. "I have never felt a weapon feel like this! I mean my DC-15 felt natural to me but not this natural!," Jerex said in awe. "Feels good for the first time dont it?," Anakin asks from the doorway. "Yeah it does gen- Anakin." "Well lets get you before the Jedi Council to get this over with." "Um what is the protical for meeting the Jedi Concil?" "Just speak when spoken to and try not to get snippy with them either. They dont really appreciate it," Anakin tells Jerex with a laugh. "I think I can do that Anakin thats like the first thing they teach you on Kamino." "Then you will do just fine."
Walking down the Temple halls had a soothing affect on Jerex so nice and calm not like on Kamino. He could hear the younglings swimming in the lake in the Room of a Thousand Fountains. "If I have to leave thats the last place im visiting," Jerex thinks to himself. The rest of the trip went by quietly and quickly before Jerex knew it he was standing in front of the Council room door. "Deep breathes I can do this," Jerex tells himself either way it was all to scary leaving Kamino chasing something that might not happen. His brothers must think he is crazy but he knew one person who didnt think he was crazy Tyria Durrun she believed in him and that gave him strength to ask The Council's permission to enter and stand in the middle of the floor. All of the members were there most in holographic form the obvious reason because it is war. Jerex looked all around him there was Yoda, Mace Windu, Obi-Wan Kenobi, Adi Gallia, Saesee Tiin, and all the rest were in holo form. "Welcome young Jerex do you know why your here?" Mace asks. "Yes my Master I have discovered I am a possible force sensitive. I know a clone never even has had a slim chance but I have overcomed the odds," Jerex tells the Council making sure he words got throught to them. "Prove this can you?" Yoda asks in his usual manner of talking. "Yes my Masters if you will give me some tests I know I can get past them," Jerex answers with his voice full of confidence. Adi brought out a datapad for Mace and several containers for Jerex to lift. Jerex's first test was to sense what would pop up on the datapad screen. First a speeder pops up, "A speeder Master." Jerex replies camly. Next a blaster, Jerex continues to answer everything right that pops up on the datapad before he knew it test number one was finished.
Test number two had Jerex levitate the containers on top of eachother then put them back on the ground. To The Council's surprise Jerex used both hands one concentrating on one box the second on another. The Council hadnt seen anyone with no jedi training do that they knew then and there that Jerex would become very powerful. Jerex finshed the test with flying colors. "Jerex we have made our desicison if you want to you may join the Jedi. But this is your choice is it what you want?" Mace asks. "Yes Masters I do want to join the Jedi," Jerex answers trying real hard to keep from leaping around the room in joy. "Then Master Zun Keldrona teach you he will," Yoda told Jerex sensing his excitement. Zun Keldrona walked in he was muscular in the chest, legs, and arms anything a woman could fall for. He had jet black hair and a tan complection he radiated power in the Force and Jerex knew right then and there that he had a good teacher.
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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Mon Apr 04, 2011 5:25 pm

You're doing great!!! I like his master, and I can't wait to read more about him. Wink Keep up the good work!

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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Mon Apr 04, 2011 5:26 pm

Thank you Satine Im going to start on Chapter 5 very soon! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Mon Apr 04, 2011 7:11 pm

That was totally awesome Rex'sgirl!!!!!! Very Happy Keep going!! I can't wait to find out what happens next!! Jerex's master sounds awesome!!!!!! Very Happy

LOL, I was listening to this song on my iTunes, and as soon as I read the part where Anakin tells Jerex to not speak unless spoken to, and to not get snippy with them, the song said, "Slow to Speak, and Slow to get Angry". Ironic huh? Wink LOL!

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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Tue Apr 05, 2011 8:17 am

Whoa that is sooooo cool!!! Lol!! Totally ironic!!Im glad you like the story so far I hate the chapters are so short!
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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Thu May 05, 2011 8:32 pm

Im sorry at how long it took me to get the next chapter up. I hope you enjoy this chapter I worked hard on it!
One of a Kind
Chapter 5

Jerex and his new Master Zun Keldrona walked down the hall of the Temple. The Jedi Council finshed the meeting by giving them a mission to the Mid Rim planet Ankus. Zun's commander Zef was waiting in the hanger with his squad. His squad is Blazing squad their armor has orange and red markings. Blazing squad is the second most famous squad in the Republic and feared througout the galaxy. "Commander Zef," Zun shouts from across the hanger, "I would like you to meet my new padawan Jerex." "JEREX," comes a clone voice from the middle of the squad. Jerex looks around at the faces that look exactly like him. "Jerex over here," the voice says again. Rosh pushes his brothers out of the way to see his brother that actually became a jedi padawan. "Rosh is that you," Jerex says in amazment. "Yes it is me brother I'm sorry that I laughed at you it was wrong of me," Rosh hangs his head. "Dont worry Rosh it wasnt your fault I know its hard to believe that I was Force sensitive." "Jerex I would like you to meet Commander Zef I trust him with my life," Zun interrupts. "Hello Commander," Jerex tries his best to greet the clone they way a jedi should. "Sir," Zun snaps to attention. "At ease soldier," Jerex tells his brother. "Ok listen up men I have another mission for us to Ankus. This planet is in the Mid Rim and rocky be prepared to climb and have rough conditions. I want you to pack enough food capsules and water capsules. Also make sure you bring enough power packs for your weapons.," Zun tells his men. "Yes sir," the team says saluting.
Jerex stayed in his quarters for the last time for who knows how long. His master showed him a type of lightsaber combant that Zun uses. Jerex was glad to be learning Makashi so if he was ever unarmed he could fight hand to hand. Jerex already knew hand to hand but Makashi hand to hand was more complicated and better. Jerex thought about seeing Rosh again he loves his brother but he didnt know what he would do if he lost his brother in front of himself. Jerex couldnt sleep he grabbed his lightsaber and walked to the training area. He took a deep breath and gripped the lightsaber. The lightsaber moved around part of him ,the movement pure contention just what Makashi is. He spun and moved the lightsaber faster and faster it was like a dance. A dance where he didnt want to quit. His feet movement was perfect his lightsaber a blur. "Shouldnt you be getting some sleep," a voice said from the doorway of the arena. "Maybe. And who is the one who should care," Jerex raises a eyebrow at the shadow in the doorway. "Padawan Offee is the one who cares," Barriss tells him stifling a laugh. "Oh sorry Barriss," Jerex apologizes. "Its ok. So are you ready for your first mission," Barriss asks him. "Yeah Im a little nervous." "Why are you nervous?" "Im afraid that I will do something wrong and get Zun or my brothers killed. What if we fail the mission?" "Jerex you are strong in the Force there is nothing to worry about. Jerex dont worry about failing the mission its not like we are invinciable. We lose some battles." "Thanks Barriss that makes me feel better." "Glad I could help. Try to get some sleep Jerex," Barriss walks out of the training area heading to her quarters. Jerex looks at his lightsaber his eyelids begin to droop. He clips the lightsaber to his belt and heads to his quarters for a peaceful sleep.
Jerex looked at the crono it was still early so he decided to gather his things and make one trip to the Room of a Thousand Fountains to relaxe before heading off to a battle he didnt know if he would win. Once he got there some of the younglings were swimming in the lake enjoying the time they could away from training. The squeals coming from the younglings told him they were splashing around and horse playing. Jerex closed his eyes and meditated until a voice inturrupted him from his trance. "Jerex we are ready to go," his master told him. "Coming my master." Jerex walked up the ramp to the jedi cruisor. In a couple days he would face the enemy.
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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Thu May 05, 2011 10:06 pm

Yay! New chapter! I'm really enjoying this story. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Thu May 05, 2011 10:07 pm

Thanks Satine! I know the squad name isnt the greatest but I couldnt think of anything! Rolling Eyes
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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Thu May 05, 2011 10:10 pm

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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Thu May 05, 2011 10:15 pm

Thanks Satine! It was hard picking a squad name all the cool ones are taken! Lol!
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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Mon Jun 06, 2011 6:58 pm

Im working on Chapter 6 right now!! I don't think this is the greatest fanfiction I have ever done and I don't know where I'm going with it either! Lol! Razz I will figure something out though!!
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PostSubject: Re: One of a Kind.   Sat Jun 11, 2011 7:16 pm

Yay!!!! I finally got another chapter done!! In my opinion this story isn't as good as my Too Much Free Time!! Anyway on to the chapter!!!
One of a Kind
Chapter 6
The blue and white streaks encircled the Republic cruiser; Freedom. The streaks made Jerex feel peaceful. He was always fascinated with space travel; the complexity of the coordinates, the whirr of the hyperdrive engine, and then the stars becoming blurs.
"Jerex," his master Zun Keldrona yells from across the room.
"Yes master," Jerex turns around to see what his master wants.
"I think its time for you to start learning to meditate," Zun tells his clone apprentice.
"Why is that master;" Jerex looks confused he never heard of meditating.
"Well I can feel your peaceful emotion flowing through the Force," Zun waves his hand for his apprentice to follow him. Zun and Jerex go to to the quarter area of the ship. Zun walks right to his quarters. Jerex walks in to see that the area is huge; but there is hardly any possessions. Being a jedi means no personal possessions except for their robes and lightsaber.
"Ok Jerex I want you to sit in front of me and cross your legs," Zun sits down gracefully. Jerex sits across from his master then crosses his legs.
"Ok Jerex now all you have to do is breathe in the emotions feel them, then breathe the emotions out. Just that simple," Zun showed Jerex all the basics of meditating. Jerex finally got the hang of it. He felt callm, at ease, and relaxe. Suddenly the door swishes open and Zef is standing in the doorway.
"General we are coming up. On Ankus," Zef reports.
"Ok Zef load your men on the gunships," Zun orders the commander. "Jerex grab your pack and get aboard a gunship."
"Yes my master." Jerex runs to his quarters, grabs his bag, and jumps into the LAAT.
"Here we go," Jerex thinks.
Ok I know not very long but I will try to make the next one longer!
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