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PostSubject: I Am Asajj Ventress   Sat Jun 11, 2011 9:04 pm

Ok I said I would write a fanfiction about Asajj so tada!!! Lol!!! I hope y'all like it!! I love hearing yalls comments!!!
I Am Asajj Ventress
Chapter 1
"This stupid ship is always cold," Asajj Ventress sat up in bed. "That is the problem with having a ship full of brainless droids."
Ventress could never sleep well she always had dreams of vengeance and the first years of her life. Vengeance something the Dark Side feeds on. Ventress craves vengeance on Anakin Skywalker, Obi-Wan Kenobi, and Skywalker's annoying pet. Asajj slid out of bed and grabbed her curve hilted lightsabers to go train.Training helped rid her of the memories. Only one way to forget was to train hard and destroy as many things with the blood red blades as possible for her.
The training droid turned around tracking Ventress's quick movements. Asajj stopped running and faced the droid. The droid pin pointed Asajj's location and shot at her with its blaster pistol. "Is that the best you got!" Ventress yelled at the droid. She back flipped multiple times eluding four of the bolts. While she flipped she ignited her duel blades. With the blades she reflected the whizzing bolts. After reflecting most of the bolts she charged the droid.
"Say goodbye droid," Asajj spat while she cleaved the droid in two.
"Thanks for the workout." Ventress turned away from the sparking and crackling droid. The door swished behind her leaving the cleaning droids to do their thing.
"Mistress," the shrill annoying voice of a droid came from behind Ventress.
"Yes," Ventress asked between gritted teeth. It was so hard to keep from slicing the mindless oil guzzler to pieces.
"Count Dooku demands you contact him. He has a mission for you," the droid tells Ventress. Mindless to how much she wanted to use its own arm to destroy it.
"Ok get the transmission started. Also use the scramble code 2341-S."
"Yes mistress! Wait what was the scramble code again?"
"YOU WORTHLESS PEICE OF SCRAP METAL!!! I SAID USE CODE 2341-S!!!!! Don't forget! The last thing we need is the Republic to know where we are going," Ventress screams at the droid. She could feel her blood boiling and the dark wave of the Dark Side crashing over her.
"Yes mistress, the droid turned around and scrambled down the hall with clanking noises echoing down the hall.
"Stupid.....mindless.......worthless droids!" Asajj Ventress bowed in front of the blue hologram of Count Dooku.
"What is thy bidding my master," Ventress asks with her head bowed.
"Sepratist spys have given word that there is a Republic base on Felucia. I want you to go there and destroy it. Also Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker, and Ahsoka Tano is on their way to inspect it right now. I want you to kill them. Any means necessary," Dooku finished briefing her.
Ventress raised her head and looked her master right into his holographic eyes. "Yes my master. I will succeed."
"For your sake you should, Dooku"s image fizzled out.
"I will succeed old man. I will prove myself to you," Asajj promised.
Ok that is chapter one I can't wait to hear what y'all think!!
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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Sun Jun 12, 2011 6:08 am

Oh my gosh I LOVE it!!!!!!!!!! It's so interesting to see what goes on in Ventress's head, and you did an EXCELLENT job with all the characters! Can't wait to read more!

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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Sun Jun 12, 2011 7:41 am

Aw thanks Satine! Im glad you liked it!! I wish the chapter wasn't so short though!
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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Sun Jun 12, 2011 1:24 pm

Wow! That's cool! It is kinda interesting to see what she thinks. It gives her more depth.

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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Sun Jun 12, 2011 1:46 pm

Thanks Allishmalli I really wanted to try and show how she thinks and what goes on in her head! Oh btw I absolutely LOVE the verses in your sig!!!
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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Sun Jun 12, 2011 2:31 pm

LOVE IT!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Sun Jun 12, 2011 2:35 pm

Your welcome and thank you, Rex'sgirl!

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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Sun Jun 12, 2011 3:22 pm

Thanks Sokafan4ever!!!
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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Mon Jun 13, 2011 7:00 am

I like your signature too allishmalli!

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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Mon Jun 13, 2011 10:10 am

Thanks, DSK! I like yours too!

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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Mon Jun 13, 2011 5:49 pm

very cool! cant wait for more! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Mon Jun 13, 2011 5:55 pm

Thank you Shaak Ti!!
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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Mon Jun 13, 2011 6:03 pm

I'm usually don't like fanfics but this one is actually really good! I can't wait to read more!
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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Mon Jun 13, 2011 6:11 pm

Thank you CBC Im glad you like it!
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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Mon Jun 13, 2011 8:05 pm

OOH!!! Nice job Rex'sgirl!!!!! Very Happy I love it! Keep writing!!!!

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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Tue Jun 14, 2011 11:18 am

Thanks Jedi~Chick!
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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Fri Jun 17, 2011 8:28 am

It's great Rex'sgirl. celebrate Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more! I've never read anything about Ventress before, so this is very interesting. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Fri Jun 17, 2011 8:35 am

Thanks Obi-Wan's padawan! Im going to start on chapter 2 ASAP!
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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Fri Jun 17, 2011 8:53 am

Sweet! Good luck with it... Wink
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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Fri Jun 17, 2011 9:15 am

Thanks!
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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Tue Aug 23, 2011 11:57 am

Wow, I actually hadn't thought as much about what Ventress thought as much as what she did...Great job with this!!
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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Tue Aug 23, 2011 1:32 pm

Thank you! That really means alot! Im suppose to be updating it very soon!
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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Tue Aug 23, 2011 3:14 pm

Yeah, you're a lot more experienced than me...I posted something, but I'm still not sure abut it, ya know?
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PostSubject: Re: I Am Asajj Ventress   Tue Aug 23, 2011 4:16 pm

I'll have to read it! The best thing is to practice and pray to God for help! He has helped me so much!
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