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PostSubject: Ahsoka's Journey.   Thu Jun 30, 2011 7:32 pm

I really wanted to write a fanfic of Ahsoka's first years and all her adventures before being a padawan to Anakin Skywalker! I hope yall enjoy it! And critic me I want to know!
Ahsoka’s Journey
Chapter 1


The adult Togruta sat in the Medical Ward room on Shili. Her skin still shone with the sheen of sweat. She had just gone through 48 hours of labor but when she saw the little Togruta she felt a burst of pride shoot through her heart. Now she just waited for the doctors to bring the orange bundle back to her. Finally the door creaked open the noise startled her sleeping husband from the chair he was sleeping in. The doctor walked in carrying a baby swaddled in a pink blanket the. She wiped her eyes but the tears were replaced.



“Mr. Zeb and Mrs. Lelila Tano we need a name for her birth certificate please.”

“Ahsoka….Ahsoka Tano,” Lelila told the doctor. Her and Zeb already had the name chosen since they found out the baby was a girl. Zeb walked to the bedside once the doctors left. He wanted to see his beautiful baby girl.

“She has your skin color,” Zeb tells his wife while rubbing his calloused hands against Ahsoka’s soft baby skin.

“Well she might have my skin color but she has your eyes,” Lelila smiles at him.

Zeb bends over and kisses his wife.



Ahsoka cuddles against her mother and falls asleep. If only her parents knew how special their little girl is and what she would become. The next morning Ahsoka woke up and looked around the room. “Well this is this place I was born but it doesn’t feel like home,” Ahsoka thought. She looked at the chair her father was sleeping in.

He is my father. I can feel it. I don’t know his name but I will someday.”

She turns and looks at the woman who she is cuddled close to, “I might not know her name but she is my mother.” Ahsoka can feel her parents she doesn’t understand how she knows or feels but one day it will all come to her. Ahsoka snuggled closer to her mother feeling comfort from her mother’s beating heart she falls back to sleep.



“Mrs. Tano,” the doctor walks in a hour later, “We have cleared you and Ahsoka to go home.”

“Ah such wonderful news,” Zeb grins wide.

“Yes it is. Did you hear that Ahsoka my darling we get to ho home,” Lelila beams at her husband then Ahsoka. Lelila hands Ahsoka to Zeb to hold while she gets out of bed to dress.



Zeb holds his daughter close to his chest. Ahsoka looks up at him with her turquoise eyes. Cooing she grabs her daddy’s finger and looks at it like it’s the most fascinating thing in the world.

“Hello my Ahsoka we are going to have so much fun you and me. I will take care for you and be there when you need me. Oh your such a beautiful little girl I’m going to have to beat the boys off aren’t I?” Ahsoka cocks her her head listening to her daddy intently.



“Ok sweeties I’m ready to go,” Lelila looks at her husband and her orange bundle of joy, “Are we ready to go?”

“I think we both are,” Zeb grins handing his Ahsoka to his wife. The couple five times happier than when they first found out about Lelila being pregnant walked out of the hospital with their new babby girl.



After 30 minutes of driving the family of three made it to the cabin like home. “Welcome home Ahsoka,” her parents chorused a greeting. Walking into their house they practically have stepped into the unknown.


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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Thu Jun 30, 2011 7:35 pm

Aww, that was so cute! I love it!
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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Thu Jun 30, 2011 7:37 pm

Aww, I loved it!!! It was so sweet, I can't wait to read more. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Thu Jun 30, 2011 7:39 pm

Thank you girls that really means alot to me!
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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Thu Jun 30, 2011 7:59 pm

This is neat, I never would have thought of doing when she was born and a baby! Aw, her family is so sweet and loving to each other!!! <3 Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Thu Jun 30, 2011 8:10 pm

Thanks PJS!! I really tried to capture a loving family!! I will be reading your fanfictions very soon!
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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Thu Jun 30, 2011 10:20 pm

awwww how sweet!!! This is a really good story!

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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Thu Jun 30, 2011 10:47 pm

Thank you Satine Im so glad you like it!
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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Thu Jun 30, 2011 10:51 pm

This is cute! My fan fic I'm working on has Ahsoka's parents, but they have different names though. Can't wait to read more. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Thu Jun 30, 2011 10:54 pm

OOOOO Im so excited to ready yours JKG!!! Thank you Im so very glad you enjoyed it!!
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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Tue Aug 09, 2011 11:48 am

I will have chapter two up very soon! Ahsoka is being naughty in the new chapter! Lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Tue Aug 09, 2011 2:55 pm

LOL! I can't wait to see!

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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Tue Aug 09, 2011 9:00 pm

This is so sweet! Love it!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Tue Aug 09, 2011 9:07 pm

Thanks Arda Im still working on chapter 2!!
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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Tue Aug 09, 2011 10:57 pm

Yay!!! Chapter 2 is finished!! Hope yall enjoy it!!!
Ahsoka’s Journey
Chapter 2

Three days passed since Zeb and Lelila brought Ahsoka home. Two days passed without incident but the third was pure torture for Ahsoka’s parents. Ahsoka was in her high chair being fed breakfast by Lelila. “Ahsoka Tano hold still,” Lelila shouts while trying to get the spoon into her squirming child’s mouth. Ahsoka’s chubby arm shot out and knocked the spoon from her mother’s hand.



“Ugh!” Lelila sits the food in Ahsoka’s high chair tray and bends down to retrieve the fallen spoon. Ahsoka reaches for the bowl. Her fingers knock into it sending the bowl on the side. The sticky sloppy oatmeal oozes over the tray and ‘splot’ the oatmeal lands on an unsuspected Lelila. Lelila sits up with oatmeal splattered on her montrels and her dark blue striped lekku.

“Zeb will you come here honey,” Lelila yells for her husband.

“Yes sweetie,” Zeb answers from the living room.



Zeb walks in to see his wife standing in the kitchen looking none too happy with oatmeal dripping down her face and lekku. “Um what happened,” Zeb asks his angry wife unsurely.

“Well your daughter,” she puts emphasis on your, “dumped oatmeal on me.”

Stifling a laugh Zeb answers his distraught wife, “Calm down sweetheart. I will watch Ahsoka for you. You go get cleaned up and take a break.”

“Really,” Lelila’s eyes sparkle.

“Yep,” Zeb grins at his excited wife.

“Aw thank you honey.” Lelila kisses her husband’s cheek then runs upstairs to begin her relaxation.



“Wow you really made mommy upset,” Zeb smiles at his baby girl. Ahsoka just tilts her head listening to her daddy.

“C’mon let’s get you cleaned up,” Zeb picks Ahsoka up from her high chair to give her a bath. By the end of Ahsoka’s bath it looked like Zeb took a bath to.

“Well you stinker,” Zeb laughs wiping his face with a towel, “I think I got wetter than you.”
After Ahsoka was dried and dressed Zeb started rocking her to sleep.
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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Wed Aug 10, 2011 8:36 am

Awww, how cute! Seems Ahsoka has always been a trouble maker huh? uh hu Good job, can't wait to read more! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Wed Aug 10, 2011 11:04 am

Aww thank you Tara!! I guess so!! Lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Wed Aug 10, 2011 6:04 pm

LOL! Poor Lelila and Zeb! Good names, by the way.
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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Wed Aug 10, 2011 6:04 pm

Lol!! I know Ahsoka is so naughty!! Thank you!
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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Wed Aug 17, 2011 6:43 pm

That was sweet!!! Baby Ahsoka is so cute!

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PostSubject: Re: Ahsoka's Journey.   Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:48 pm

Aw thank you Satine! I try to make her sweet and a dash of naughty! Lol!
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