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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Wed Jul 13, 2011 1:11 pm

Thank you!!!! You'll see that a LOT in this story. I'll fill y'all in when I introduce new characters based off of people. Wink

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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Wed Jul 13, 2011 7:34 pm

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7160909/8/

There's Chapter 8!!!!!!! This chapter was more of a filler/transition chapter. Chapter 9 is VERY important, and after that it's like, action filled. XDDD

The next chapter will have one of my favorite characters, Maryanna, in it. Smile Maryanna from here, TLF, is that character. My IRL best friend, I based Maryanna after her. (no that's not her real name, but a mixture of her middle and first names, and she came up with it.) Wink

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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Thu Jul 14, 2011 7:00 am

Also, I updated Life With The Skywalkers (my Luke and Mara family story) so if y'all still want to read that, go ahead and check it out! Don't forget to review!!! (I am saying that a lot these days.....) That chapter of LWTS was my FAVORITE ONE YET!!!!!!!!!!! It's quite Mara centric....and was super fun to write. Beware.....it's kinda mushy. XDDDD But sweet! Smile

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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Thu Jul 14, 2011 1:54 pm

Alrighty!!!!! Very Happy Chapter 9 is UP! It's longer than most, 3,000+ words! Enjoy!!!!!!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7160909/9/

In this chapter, we meet Maryanna, who is based of of my best friend, Maryanna (from TLF) I hope y'all like it! I personally love this chapter. It's got a lot in it!!!!! XD Please review, or at least tell me here what you think. Wink Thank you all so much!!!!!!!

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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Fri Jul 15, 2011 7:12 pm

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7160909/10/

*is sorta sad* I haven't gotten much feedback. If I'm posting too fast, or y'all have lost interest, let me know! I'll stop. XDDD

Please let me know what you think! I'll cry! *jk*
But I really do want to know. I personally think I'm moving too fast. Razz I don't know how to slow it down though.....*sighs* Oh well.

Thanks to Inksaber/StarWarsArtist for reviewing for me!!!!!! *hugs* Love you sister! Wink

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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Fri Jul 15, 2011 7:47 pm

Im really liking itkeep on going!!
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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Fri Jul 15, 2011 8:31 pm

Thanks Rex'sgirl!!!!! Very Happy

And you to SWA! Very Happy I loved your comment girlfriend! Wink

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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Fri Jul 15, 2011 8:36 pm

Your welcome! Very Happy I loved your chapter!
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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Sat Jul 16, 2011 8:23 am

Thanksies! Very Happy The next chapter I am SO stressed/worried about. XDDD I honestly don't know why. I stayed up until 2am last night gutting and rewriting the ENTIRE chapter 12. Razz Luckily, 11 was already rewritten/gutted the night before. Razz

I'll have Chapter 11 up today!

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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Sat Jul 16, 2011 11:23 am

*screams* Okay. Here's chapter 11. *cringes* Please review and ease my worries about this story. Razz I'm starting to regret putting it up.....but that might just be the fact that I stayed up until 2am editing. Whatever. Here ya go!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7160909/11/

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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Sat Jul 16, 2011 11:26 am

Yay I'm going to read it right now!!
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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Sat Jul 16, 2011 12:04 pm

Thanks Rex'sgirl!!!! I loved your review. Wink Thank you girlfriend! *hugs*

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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Sat Jul 16, 2011 12:15 pm

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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Sat Jul 16, 2011 12:19 pm

I loved your review so much!!!!!!! Thank you!!!!!!!! *squeezes so hard she has trouble breathing* Ooh, sorry! Razz LOL! Thanks so much!!!!!!!! I am so excited you liked it, and your review made my day. Wink

Yes, i am mean, and left it at a nasty cliffhangar. XDDD I shall post Chapter 12 after I get back from the movies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Sat Jul 16, 2011 12:31 pm

*Gasps for breath* Your...welcome... Wink
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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Sat Jul 16, 2011 1:20 pm

I can't believe you think the newest chapter is bad Jedi~Chick!!! It's definitely the opposite of that!!! (a.k.a. amazing!!!)
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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Sat Jul 16, 2011 1:30 pm

Your welcome Jedi~Chick!! I'm seriously loving this story you shouldn't be afraid to post new chapters!!
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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Sat Jul 16, 2011 4:53 pm

Haha!! Thanks y'all SO MUCH!!!!!

I'm posting the next chapter now! Sorry to leave ya hanging, I was out at the movies and then was at church. Wink

EDIT: Here's the new chapter!!!!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7160909/12/

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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Sun Jul 17, 2011 4:48 pm

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7160909/13/

Now here is Chapter 13!!!!!!! Very Happy I love this chapter. XDD

Here we introduce my favorite character Ember Sparkstone! Later I will post an 'interview' with Ember, that I wrote with Ember's real-life counterpart, my cousin, Chibi*Chick. Wink

Thank you a billion times to SWA and Ley for already reviewing! SWA, I love your reviews!!!! Very Happy


And btw, Michaelll Jaxxon was a direct instruction from Chibi*Chick. i explained the scene to her, and she was like, 'Wait, what's with the one glove? Is she like....in love with Michael Jackson or something?" I had to explain about DV and she was like, "OOHHHH, well, you can use that you know." XDDDD So there ya go. Wink I love it. Ember is a major character soon/coming up/in future chapters, so be ready for her! LOL!

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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Mon Jul 18, 2011 10:43 am

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7160909/14/

Alright, here's chapter 14. Wink I'm in love with reviews....so.....PRETTY PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very Happy I love love love love love getting your feedback! Even if you just say, 'nice job'. (although, i'd love more. xDDD)

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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Mon Jul 18, 2011 6:24 pm

Haha.....y'all are gonna hate me. Razz

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7160909/15/

CHAPTER 15!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now read, enjoy, and review. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Mon Jul 18, 2011 6:34 pm

Please get the next chapter out soon! I loveyoda this story!
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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Mon Jul 18, 2011 6:35 pm

LOL!!! Inksaber/SWA, I LOVE LOVE LOVED your review. You made me literally LOL. Wink I promise to get chapter 16 up tomorrow morning, bright and early!!!!!!! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Tue Jul 19, 2011 9:02 am

Well, it's the morning! Though it isn't exactly bright and early......xD Oh well! Chapter 16 is up!!!!!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7160909/16/

So....TADA!!!!!!!!! Very Happy Pretty pretty please review. Smile For me. Smile

Also, chapter 17 introduces one of my favorite characters. Wink I'll give you a backstory on this new character once I get chapter 17 up. Wink

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PostSubject: Re: What do you think?   Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:42 am

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7160909/17/

And we have Chapter 17!!!!! Very Happy I love reviews, so you know the drill!!! Very Happy

When we're done with this story, I think I'm going to put up my interview with Ember Sparkstone. Smile I re-read it last night and I just about died laughing. xDD

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