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PostSubject: The fight (rp)    Wed Aug 03, 2011 12:47 pm

It isn't finished yet. But I think that It is sort of good.


"You called? What's up?" Asked Cory

"Yea..  I did. What's with the new name,Thanatos?" I asked. 

"That's my Darth name." 

I scoffed, rolling my eyes. Then I punch his shoulder, running into the darkness. "Really? Darth name?" 

Cory laughs, running to where I was last heard, using the force to search for me. At the same time, his voice was ringing through my head. He said, "You're the only person I let, call me by my real name." He appears in the corner of my eyes, multiple times. 

I looked around confused, trying to pin-point his location. Darting my eyes all around the room, unable to spot him. 

Then out of the blue, he falls from above, pinning me down. I struggled against his grasps, only to get him to laugh. He said, "So is that what you wanted earlier was to criticize my name?" "No." I responded, still struggling. "Then what, m'lady? I'm all ears." He says tightening his grip on my arm. "Spar."  I said trying to squirm from his grasps. He continues laughing as I squirm. "Of course, m'lady." He grabs me by my neck lifting me to my feet. I struggle in his grasps as his fingers close around my neck, cutting off my air supply and circulation. I gasp for breathe and start coughing slightly. I grab his arm trying to loosen his grip, with no luck. He tosses me a few feet from him. I fly backwards into wall coughing. I flip, dropping onto one knee, before standing up. I force kick him in the face following the kick with a punch to the jaw. As my leg comes close to his face, he spin furiously then he grabs my leg, bringing me in as I do I back kick to my face. Unable to get away, the kick lands on my cheek, causing a red mark. I spit blood trying to roll away from him, but with his vine like grip on my arm, he rolls right with me. I glare at him with my baby blue eyes as he throws a punch towards my jaw. My head gets knocked back as a take the punch. I knee him in the stomach. As his grip loosens on my arm, I jump up, kicking you in the stomach. He grabs my leg, slamming it onto the ground, hard. I wince at the impact and tries to get up, my back to him. He slams his foot onto my back, not allowing me to get up. I crash to the floor breathing hard. He continues to pin my down with his foot. I struggle under his foot, unable to get loose. "Surrender?" he says as he grabs my arm, pulling it up, and twisting it in an awkward angle. I wince in pain, as he continues to twist my arm. "No." I responded through the excruciating pain. I force push him away, enough to get up. I ram my shoulder into him, only to get placed in a headlock. "Shab!" I spat as I struggle against him. "Surrender now, m'lady?" Cory asked with a wink. "Never." I said, as I kicked him in the ankle. Cory didn't even flinch, instead, he kicked me in the ankle twice as hard. I collapse backwards due to the pain. Cory still had me in a headlock but then shifted to supporting my weight.
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PostSubject: Re: The fight (rp)    Wed Aug 03, 2011 12:48 pm

I didn't do the edits yet.. And I was doing it on my iPad.. So.. Hope that you like it!
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PostSubject: Re: The fight (rp)    Thu Aug 04, 2011 10:06 pm

Cool! That's great Atina!

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PostSubject: Re: The fight (rp)    Fri Aug 05, 2011 8:07 am

nice job Atina!!!!! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: The fight (rp)    Fri Aug 05, 2011 8:10 pm

Thank you!
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PostSubject: Re: The fight (rp)    Fri Aug 05, 2011 8:51 pm

That's cool! You're good at describing battle scenes!
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PostSubject: Re: The fight (rp)    Sat Aug 06, 2011 7:06 pm

Thanks! This way a Roleplay from facebook. I was editing it to be a fanfic glad that you like it! More coming soon. I've been too busy to type out the rest. I'll also be posted stuff on my new blog. Please check it out. it's on my siggy
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