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PostSubject: Nicknames By Ahsoka_Tano   Fri Mar 09, 2012 9:29 pm

I wrote this, thinking about how I miss the days when Ahsoka still fit the word Snips and there we always jokes floating around...

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Ahsoka’s last words slipped off her lips, “Goodbye, Skyguy.” Anakin hung his head over his dead Padawan’s body, everything he had never said flooding over him in the form of guilt. She had taken her death like a true Jedi; tall, strong, brave and with a sacrifice. It hit him hard when he realized how much she had changed. He had made her this way, so mature. But he wasn’t proud of it. He forced her to grow up, the war demanded it as well, and she had complied. Her youth was something she was willing to give up. It was priceless, like life itself. The biting wind frosted her body with pure white snow, reminding him of something else she had given up on: purity. She watched her friends die bloody deaths many times, sometimes even at his commands; she led them to their deaths, putting her at risk as well. So engulfed in his own pain, he had never noticed her’s. The choices she made. Self-sacrifices. He remembered well the time he had caught her with Lux, what she had told him. What she gave up to serve in the war. The moment on Shilli, her parents had invited her to stay, and she had refused. Now that he thought about it, the pain mixed with sorrow on her face as they left wasn’t seen by anyone. Not even him. Her peaceful face held a smile. Maybe she was happy. Happier dead? It seemed impossible, but the way she had faced everything and given it up for something much less, it seemed so true. The nicknames they shared were a symbol of their bond, one that had to be broken. But he would never forget them. Maybe the bond would be broken, but the names would always be something stored in his heart. “May the Force be with you, Snips,” He said as he kissed her forehead and made his way back to camp, “Always.”

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PostSubject: Re: Nicknames By Ahsoka_Tano   Fri Mar 09, 2012 9:34 pm

Beautiful! A few typos, but WOW! Great job Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Nicknames By Ahsoka_Tano   Fri Mar 09, 2012 9:47 pm

Looove it!
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PostSubject: Re: Nicknames By Ahsoka_Tano   Sat Mar 10, 2012 7:44 am

Aww, that's so sad. *sniff sniff* It's so good though, I love it!

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PostSubject: Re: Nicknames By Ahsoka_Tano   Wed Mar 14, 2012 6:34 pm

*sniff sniff CRYING MY EVES OUT* so sweet!
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PostSubject: Re: Nicknames By Ahsoka_Tano   Fri May 04, 2012 6:39 pm

Shocked

*SOBBING*

YOU LOVE MAKING PEOPLE CRY, DON'T YOU AHSOKA!?!?!

(In other words, great job! ;D)
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